This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wow Christian, you have taken our prompt and created an interesting piece of writing. I like how you have included the pictures of the towers you mention in your writing . Why do you particularly want to visit Burj Khalifa?
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Wow Christian, you have taken our prompt and created an interesting piece of writing. I like how you have included the pictures of the towers you mention in your writing . Why do you particularly want to visit Burj Khalifa?
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