This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Fantastic work Christian. This story reflect our Learning Powers - Persist and Focus. Hare showed us that if he persists and doesn't give up and stays focussed on a task he will achieve success.
Hi Christian. My name is Telesia. I am a year 6 student from St. Bernadette's Primary School. I liked that you made an animation to present the hare and the tortoise. Next time, maybe you could use some text because no one said anything and I didn't see the end where the tortoise won. I can't wait to see your next piece of work!
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Fantastic work Christian. This story reflect our Learning Powers - Persist and Focus. Hare showed us that if he persists and doesn't give up and stays focussed on a task he will achieve success.
ReplyDeleteHi Christian. My name is Telesia. I am a year 6 student from St. Bernadette's Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI liked that you made an animation to present the hare and the tortoise. Next time, maybe you could use some text because no one said anything and I didn't see the end where the tortoise won.
I can't wait to see your next piece of work!